review ¹ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF Õ M.A. JacksonThis was lovely even given a few issues with the writing it was still enough for a full on 4Like An Old Fashioned Love Song this story features ecognisable ealistic BDSM with ecognisable eal people as the Top and *Bottom And Like Nearly Every Other Recognisable * And like nearly every other ecognisable ealistic BDSM story out there this gets downrated and downtalked for being too sweet no proper BDSM and too fluffyWhen I look at such downrated and downtalked for being too sweet no proper BDSM and too fluffyWhen I look at such zany eactions as those I ead egarding this story I get all agey over the fact that by now BDSM and kink are so utterly misrepresented to omance eaders by a bazillion writers not knowing the first things about it that these eaders end up calling ealistic enditions of BDSM out for being unrealistic or fluffy God beware where do we end if lifestylers manage to have some fun without torturing each other into PTSD or show some common sense and decency Can t have that now can we Well newsflash this was a very ealistic BDSM story For once the TPE aspect as well was treated as it should be namely valid only until one party decides it s over This happens often in eal life than you d think if all you do is ead
novels I know many many subs and doms who simply walk out of a elationship because doesn t work BDSM isn t better in that espect than vanilla because it sure as hell doesn t cure the problems arising in ANY elationship It s just a different expression of itAs such it was efreshing to ead here the eflections of both dom and sub about play which clearly went wrong and which overstepped boundaries which in eality is by the way far worse than people seem to think It dealt with errors made by the dom also happens often than you d think in a manner that I ve seen play out before me if both parties are lucky that isI had niggles with the writing per se there were plotholes and the prose needed showing and less telling This author needs experience and a good demanding betaeditor to work with Which is why I didn t give it 5However BDSM wise and as a peek at elationship dynamics this was lovely and well observed Not even 150 years ago people duelled over what we today consider minor slights eceived in public in front of witnesses There were duels as ecently as 19. Dear AuthorI am a Dom who blew it with my boy; see the picture and you will see I sent him to the corner for punishment out in my backyard Unfortunately when I did that some friends of mine and some of his friends were there also for a BB party After the party was over he left and it has been five days He isn’t with any of his friends or his family and I am worried I have tried calling him emailing him and texting him but no esponse I finally got a clue I emembered him telling me about a chance to be a counselor and trainer. .romance novels I know many many subs and doms who simply walk out of a elationship because
67 in France for instance again over public humiliation There have been several ecent suicides over public humiliation eg outing people as gay publishing photos or videos of them So anyone who considers unwanted humiliation in front of friends and one s peers as something which is of no conseuence eally needs to get their value systems straightened out again Public humiliation is a severe injury and most cannot be part of BDSM play when it isn t agreed to Nice prompt and image but the execution a mess This story was a lot of things but not BDSM Both men acted like children I didn t see a Dom and sub here I saw two idiots Writing was okay but there was no plot and the MCs were one dimensional The incident that triggered the punishment was idiculous This was an all around aggravating story no steam and almost no interaction between the MCs Okay It s been a stressful day but I eally want to write this eview so forgive me if it ends up being a bit scrappy First off The prompt is very specific and somewhat constraining and kudos to M A Jackson for fulfilling it so well I particularly liked the BDSM Lite tagThe start of the story is lovely showing us just how upset and angry Dylan is over his treatment Great dialogue here Fucked up big time Bryan So Bryan has humiliated Dylan and now ealises what a mess he has made of their elationship The description of the backyard after the party is understated and yet so sad in a way a sense of emptiness after what was not long before a cheerful noisy munch with friends Now the empty backyard seems to mock Bryan as he stand there wondering what he has done wrongAnd that is the beauty
Of This Story Bryan Really Doesn Tthis story Bryan eally doesn t I wonder if this is the first munch Dylan and he have hosted That would explain their eactions Bryan trying too hard maybe too wrapped up in trying to impress his friends to actually think the whole situation through and Dylan messing about for the same eason Dylan was as much at fault for not saying no and simply tolerating the punishment without protest even though Bryan knew he hated it I love the eality of this situation Two people still learning still unsure neither wanting to let the other or their friends.
an intense tennis camp where are not allowed to have any contact with anyone except for emergencies The camp ends next week Friday will he come back to me or by humiliating him did I lose him for good I love him Please write this story and let him know I love himPhoto Description A young man stands facing a wooden privacy fence arms aised behind his head He wears a flipped sun visor no shirt and his white shorts are pulled low exposing his muscled back and tanned bottomThis story was written as a part of the MM Roman. Down and both getting it oh so wrong Mistakes on all sides Bryan for humiliating Dylan without permission in a situation where Dylan eally had no choice if he was not to embarrass his dom Dylan for getting into the situation in the first place especially if this WAS their first time hosting a munch and the friends for not having uiet word with the pair of them and making it something they could all laugh about There is a little too much telling eg Marshall had mentored Bryan when he and Dylan had joined but we are made aware that Bryan and Dylan are elatively new to thisI felt eal sympathy for Bryan doing what he relatively new to thisI felt eal sympathy for BryanAT AN INTENSE TENNIS CAMP WHERE
what he was ight and can honestly say I understood WHY he acted the way he did Bryan comes over as very unsure of himself and I think the whole story is summed up perfectly a couple of places Doms are human too pet We can mistakes as well And this They had let one another down he and Bryan Now for the uibbles The story drags in places and I think it could have been shortened without losing any of the tension A good editor would have tightened it up However the author DID fulfil a pretty exacting prompt I would have like fewer info dumps There were a few too many incidental characters and later on the dialogue becomes somewhat clunky e g Oh Bry It s nothing personal but it will always be your fault as D is my brother But when it comes down to it this is just ight People DO act in silly ways either from ignorance or fear or trying to show off in front of others People DO walk away after being humiliated BDSM lite Exactly Loved it I fear I need to stop eading BDSM stories or I ll throw my laptop one dayview spoiler The punishment in the beginning was than deserved so I eally don t see what the fuss is about and the Dom warned his sub about the whole thing Humiliated him As if all Bryan did was doing his job as Dylan s Dom And how Dylan acts in the end Like a spoilt brat A sub like him He needs a cock cage daily spankings boundaries so tight he gasps for air and a Dom that eally shows him his place My Master would not have been so forgiving hide spoiler Okay ish Too much telling versus showing It looked to me the men wanted somewhat different things from their elationship. Ce Group's Love’s Landscapes event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult eaders It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some eaders The MM Romance Group strongly ecommends that each eader eview the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.DOING WHAT HE WAS RIGHT AND